Beryl Army Writers

Poem Title: The hunter's pride (nonet)

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 We scout with our lids so apart
 Trekking down a silent path 
 For what fate brings today
 Our eyes makes no blink
 We aim for game
 Now we found
 We aim,
 Straight!
 
 Author: Beryl Ace
 
 
 About Nonet:
 A nonet has nine lines. 
 The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line seven syllables, etc... until line nine finishes with one syllable. It can be on any subject and rhyming is optional. 
 
 line 1 - 9 syllables
 line 2 - 8 syllables
 line 3 - 7 syllables
 line 4 - 6 syllables
 line 5 - 5 syllables
 line 6 - 4 syllables
 line 7 - 3 syllables
 line 8 - 2 syllables
 line 9 - 1 syllable

Poem Title: The hunter's pride (nonet)

Into the thick forest with our gun We scout with our lids so apart Trekking down a silent path For what fate brings today Our eyes makes no blink We aim for game Now we found We aim, Straight! Author: Beryl Ace About Nonet: A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second lin…

Oct 29, 2013

Poem: GOD is Good (Villanelle)

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 His undying love saves 
 With Him I need not Food 
 
 Good is my mood 
 The way my heart paves
 God is Good 
 
 I walk through the neighbourhood 
 without fear for only Him I crave 
 With Him I need not Food 
 
 Look at the firewood! 
 It builds fire, not my grave 
 God is Good 
 
 In the valley where I stood 
 My fear has become brave 
 With Him I need not Food 
 
 I am protected in any mood 
 Turbulence, I find not in my wave
 God is Good
 With Him I need not Food
 
 
 By:
 Beryl Ace - JGan
 
 
 
 Short Tutorial:
 what a villanelle is____________
 
 »» Villanelle (A form of poetry)
 
 A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa.
 
 The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines).
 
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Poem: GOD is Good (Villanelle)

GOD is Good His undying love saves With Him I need not Food Good is my mood The way my heart paves God is Good I walk through the neighbourhood without fear for only Him I crave With Him I need not Food Look at the firewood! It builds fire, not my grave God is Good In the valley where I s…

Oct 18, 2013

VICTIMS

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 @ the misgivings you render bare @ my feet?
 You think they smell of roses?
 Am I to hatch fire on wet wood?
 Bless your soul tis fatal if I should
 Strike not twice as did Moses.
 
 Am I to speak of fame
 While dwell I in a house with a made up name?
 I can only but the sun praise
 Her flock of hot tears unto us bestow
 Falling and to hope she crowns an outlaw
 Lo, when all's gone by the fire would sit I and chew raw maize...
 
 Another day is another pain
 One milder since the debut of this rain
 Thoughts over despair and its depths do hover
 A search for prey through windy clime
 In wry patience that ticks not by heaven's time
 Pondered however, smashed a thousand years over...
 
 Am I to present minted shillings
 @ the market of your misgivings?
 These flaws find ease in being in than out
 Placards above bare heads speak of indifference
 Sleep comes in stretches of deafening silence
 And love? Tis merely an omission of the mouth.
 
 
 By:
 BERYL HERMES

VICTIMS

Am I to show snow white teeth @ the misgivings you render bare @ my feet? You think they smell of roses? Am I to hatch fire on wet wood? Bless your soul tis fatal if I should Strike not twice as did Moses. Am I to speak of fame While dwell I in a house with a made up name? I can only but the sun pra…

Oct 12, 2013

Poem: Untouchable (Acrostic)

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 Nought a sight of he is sought
 To and Forth, the search grows old
 Of worn out trails smeared dissolve
 Underneath the subtle sited stealth
 Cheerless smiles, the angst depressed
 Hovering by like ghosts loitering by
 An ample of thoughts takes the soul
 But where could he be to behold
 Living or dead, none can be told
 Everywhere searched and he's untouched.

Poem: Untouchable (Acrostic)

Underneath the plundered earth Nought a sight of he is sought To and Forth, the search grows old Of worn out trails smeared dissolve Underneath the subtle sited stealth Cheerless smiles, the angst depressed Hovering by like ghosts loitering by An ample of thoughts takes the soul But where could he b…

Sep 30, 2013

Tutorial 1: Analysing Poetry the easy way

<h3>Analysing Poetry the easy way - 
An Easy Way To Begin</h3>» 
 
Poetry is the dramatisation of experience in metrical language. 
 
To study or analyse poetry, one must consider many elements. A good way to start is by reading the poem silently. Then read the poem a second (third, fourth) time aloud. 
 
Reading the poem aloud makes its meaning clearer and you will hear the various poetic sound devices such as alliteration, rhyme, rhythm, etc. 
Then try writing down a brief summary to make sure that you are understanding the poem. 
 
Remember to read sentence by sentence not line by line. 
 
Questions To Answer Before Writing » 
 
1. Who is speaking? 
2. To whom? 
3. About? 
4. Tone? 
5. Examples of abstract imagery? 
6. Examples of concrete imagery? 
7. Examples of denotative language? 
8. Examples of the 5 figurative devices? 
9. Examples of rhetorical devices? 
10. End rhyme scheme? 
11. Alliteration? 
12. Assonance? 
13. Consonance? 
14. Caesura? 
15. Enjambment? 
16. Theme? 
17. Rhythm / Meter? 
18. Syntax? 
 
Writing Your Paper » 
The actual writing of the paper is probably the easiest task because you have already identified everything that needs to be covered. 
You may wish to cover all the important items in your own order, however, the order listed above does work well. 
Most likely you will not be able to simply write a few lines for each device, rather you must group these devices together. A proper order of paragraphs may flow like this: 
 
» I. Dramatic Situation 
A. Who is speaking? 
B. To whom is that speaker speaking? 
C. What is the situation? 
D. What is the speaker's tone? 
 
» II. Imagery 
 
» III. Theme 
 
» IV. Diction (word choice) 
A. Connotation (suggested meaning of words) 
B. Denotation (dictionary definition) 
C. Abstract (can only be understood intellectually) 
D. Concrete (words describing physical objects) 
E. Kinds of language» 
#1. Figurative 
a. Metaphor (implied comparisons) 
b. Simile (comparison using 'like' or 'as') 
c. Personification(giving human characteristics to an inanimate object) 
d. Metonymy (the use of an attribute or quality of an object to represent the object itself) 
e. Synecdoche (substitutes a significant part of something for the thing itself) 
#2. Rhetorical 
a. Irony (opposite of what is meant) 
b. Hyperbole (exaggeration) 
c. Allusion (reference to something) 
d. Pun (play on words) 
e. Paradox (contradictory) 
f. Oxymoron (self contradictory term) 
g. Litotes (form of understatement) 
V. Syntax (sentence structure) 
A. Length 
B. Transposed elements 
C. "Unusual" sentences 
 
» VI. Conclusion 
Remember, when you are writing this paper you should use direct quotes wherever you can, you should vary your sentence structure, and all rules of grammar still apply. 
______________________ 
 
Your analysis should then work through the following: 
 
» Who is the speaker in the poem? 
The voice in the poem isn’t necessarily the poet himself – poets often speaks through personas, real or imagined, personal or impersonal – though of course it can be. 
Is it in the first or third (or second) person? 
Is there anything that reveals or implies anything about the speaker? 
Who are they speaking to? 
 
» What is the poem’s setting? 
Where does the poem take place? 
A poem can be set anywhere, in the past, present or future. 
How does this setting/location influence the atmosphere of the poem? 
» What is the form of the poem? 
Poems can be written in various forms (see below for summary of the most common) which dictate their length, their layout on the page, the line length, whether they rhyme or not and how they rhyme (the rhyme scheme), their meter (the rhythmic structure of the line.) 
 
Some forms are associated with certain themes or genres – sonnet form, for example, is commonly used for love poetry; ballad form for narrative (story) poems. 
 
Poets make deliberate decisions about which form to choose, and form always interacts with content, whether to reinforce it or to work against it – a sonnet about the end of a relationship might have a particular poignancy, for example. 
 
The best way to work out and begin talking about the form (and also a good way to calm exam nerves) is to start counting. 
*Count the number of stanzas, *the number of lines, *the number of syllables in the lines if they are regular or there is a pattern. 
Mark the rhymes and the stresses (see below for summary of common stress patterns). This should help show up any patterns, and crucially, where the poem deviates from or tries to break away from the pattern. Thinking about rhyme for example – are all the rhymes full/perfect rhymes? (i.e. night/light, sky/high) or are there some variations? 
 
» Subject matter – 
what is the poem about? 
If you aren’t sure, try to describe exactly what is happening in the poem. 
It’s absolutely fine to express a difficulty in understanding as the poet has probably made it intentionally complex, reflecting something about what they’re trying to say. 
 
» Look at the imagery used in the poem. 
Poets often use figurative and metaphorical language that take words beyond their literal meanings, and attempt to do so in novel ways. 
Perhaps choose a couple of the most interesting images in the poem and comment on them. Why are they interesting? What is the poet doing? What does the choice of a particular word do to our understanding, or how does an image create an atmosphere in the poem? 
 
» Finally, what does the poem mean? You can write an excellent essay covering all of the previous points and ignoring this one, but if you can it’s a good idea to end with a summary of what the poem means; what the poet was trying to say, and, perhaps, whether you think they were successful in saying it. 
_____________________________ 
 
Common poetic forms and literary terms 
 
» Alexandrine: A 12 syllable poetic line 
 
» Alliteration: the repetition of consonants at the beginning of words e.g. ‘the lazy languid line’. 
When consonant sounds are repeated within words it is called consonance e.g. ‘some mammals are clammy’ 
 
» Assonance: the internal rhyming of vowel sounds e.g. ‘on a proud round cloud in white high night’ (ee cummings) 
 
» Ballad: A poetic form mostly written in four line stanzas (quatrains) of alternating lines of iambic tetrameter (four pairs of unstressed-stressed syllables) and iambic trimeter (three pairs). Usually, only the second and fourth lines are rhymed (abcb), although there is considerable variation in the form. 
Examples of ballads: The Ballad of Moll Magee, WB Yeats, Ballad of the Breadman, by Charles Causley 
 
» Blank verse: A type of poetry with a regular meter (generally iambic pentameter) but no rhyme. 
 
» Cliché: a saying, expression or idea that has been overused to the point of losing its original meaning; a stereotype. 
 
» Dramatic irony: a rhetorical device where the author causes a character to behave in a way that is contrary to the truth, or that the audience is aware is wrong. 
 
» Free verse or vers libre: A form of poetry without any regular patterns, rhymes or meters. Its form is its irregularity. 
 
» Heroic couplet: Commonly used for narrative poetry, heroic couplets are rhymed iambic pentameter pairs of lines. 
 
» Hyperbole: exaggeration 
 
» Metaphor: an analogy between two words or ideas where one stands for the other e.g. ‘his smile was the sun’ - not to be confused with the simile. 
 
»Personification – ascribing human characteristics to inanimate objects or forms 
 
» Simile – a kind of metaphor which uses the words as or like – e.g. ‘he fights like a lion’ 
 
» Sonnet: A poetic form. Fourteen lines long. Can be rhymed in a number of ways, but the most common are Shakespearean and Petrarchan. Shakespearean sonnets are rhymed in three groups of four lines rhymed alternately, followed by a couplet – i.e. abab cdcd efef gg. The closing rhyming couplet often sums up the sonnet. Petrarchan sonnets are divided into a group of eight lines, called the octave and a group of six lines called the sestet. The octave is usually rhymed abba abba, and the sestet cde cde. Usually there is a ‘turn’ or ‘volta’ - a change of direction or mood between the octave and the sestet. Traditionally, the octave put forward a proposition and the sestet offered a solution. 
Examples of sonnets: 
Sonnet 18 by Shakespeare, 
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?, 
Leda and the Swan, by WB Yeats, 
On His Blindness, by Milton 
 
» Terzarima: A rhyming verse stanza form consisting of an interlocking three line rhyme scheme – aba bcb cdc ded etc - Acquainted With The Night by Robert Frost 
 
» Villanelle: A nineteen line poem with a complex scheme consisting of alternating refrains. The best way of describing the form is to look at a villanelle itself. The most famous example in English is Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night by Dylan Thomas 
 
Describing meter 
We often talk about meter as the sequence of feet in a line, with each foot (*see note below) a group of syllable types. The most common syllable groupings are: 
» Iamb – unstressed/stressed or short/long e.g. Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day? (Shakespeare) 
 
» Trochee – stressed/unstressed or long/short e.g. Tyger Tyger burning bright (The Tyger, William Blake) 
 
» Dactyl – stressed/unstressed/unstressed or long/short/short e.g. Just for a handful of silver he left us/ Just for a riband to stick in his coat (The Lost Leader, Robert Browning) 
 
» Anapaest – unstressed/unstressed/ 
stressed or short/short/long e.g. Twas the night before Christmas and all through the house/ Not a creature was stirring not even a mouse 
 
» Spondee (stressed/stressed) and Amphibrach (unstressed/stressed/unstressed) are also quite common. 
Lines are named for the kind of feet (whether they are iambic or dactylic etc) and then for the number of feet. If there are three it is trimeter, four is tetrameter, five is pentameter, six is hexameter etc. 
 
**Note 
A foot is also called a "syllable" 
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Tutorial 1: Analysing Poetry the easy way

Analysing Poetry the easy way - An Easy Way To Begin» Poetry is the dramatisation of experience in metrical language. To study or analyse poetry, one must consider many elements. A good way to start is by reading the poem silently. Then read the poem a second (third, fourth) time aloud. Reading th…

Sep 29, 2013